There were once five brothers with the last name of Pandava
who were always competing with each other in sports. They loved to play
football, soccer, tennis, and run in races against each other. The five of them
had been like this for as long as they could remember. Sometimes the oldest
brother would win, other times the youngest. Nobody really kept a long term
record of who was the “most winningest” brother. It was all just for fun.
One day the brothers were at camp and had just finished a
game of basketball when they came across a man sitting by a water jug. There
were lots of water stations set up around the camp, so the brothers approached
this one because it was the closest. The man by the jug said to them, “The
first one to drink the water will not really be the first. It is a competition.
Who will be the first to drink the water?”
One of the brothers named Nakula replied, “I don’t have time
for your word games old man, I’m thirsty! Move over everyone. I’ll show you
exactly who will be first!” Nakula helped himself to the water and immediately
spat it out as if he had just drunk a bitter poison. The man looked knowingly
at Nakula, and smirked at the remaining brothers.
Sahadeva was the next in line. He looked at his brother with
sympathy and said, “C’mon Nakula, everyone knows the old saying ‘first is the
worst, second is the best’. Therefore I will be the winner of the water if I am
served second.” The man complied with Sahadeva’s request and served him a glass
of the water. Similar to Nakula, Sahadeva also spat out the water in disgust.
This happened again for Arjuna and Bhima. Nobody could quench
their thirst with the water from the jug. The boys were about to leave and find
another place to get a drink, but the man stopped them and asked, “Yudhishthira,
why have you not attempted to solve the riddle? Aren’t you thirsty as well?” Yudhishthira
quietly responded, “There is an old teaching that says those who are first will
be last and those who are last will be first. Therefore, I will wait to see if
anyone else wants a drink before I drink.”
The man smiled at Yudhishthira’s wisdom. He responded, “I
see no one else in line,” and handed Yudhishthira a bottle of water from behind
the jug. The water was clean and refreshing. Yudhishthira only drank a small
sip and then passed it around to his brothers. There was plenty to go around,
and Yudhishthira was praised for his wisdom.
Water Pour Jug Pouring Liquid
Author: Not Listed, Date: 2014, Source: Pixabay
Author's Note: This story is an adaptation from the story about the Pandava brothers facing a riddle at the lake in our reading this week. I chose to make the characters more modern so the story would be more relatable. I added in the detail about the brothers being competitive so that the reader would feel like they know the characters better. Instead of dying by drinking the water, the brothers were simply given bad water. In both my version and the original story, Yudhishthira proves to be the most wise and patient brother, and is the only one who is able to answer the riddle. However, in this version the "wisdom" is taken from teachings of Christianity when Jesus preaches that those who are first will be last and vice versa.
Bibliography:
"Riddles at the Lake" by Donald A. Mackenzie, from Indian Myth and Legend (1913). Web source: here
Nicole I really enjoyed reading your story! I think you did a great job telling it in your own perspective. My story also resembled yours as well. I also like how you related the story to the teachings of Jesus. I also like the moral of the story. Great job!
ReplyDeleteWow Nicole, this was a great story to read! I love reading stories that combine inspiration from multiple sources. Combining elements of the story we read in the Mahabharata with elements of Christianity is very cool, it appeals to a bigger audience.I also like that the brothers didn't die from drinking the water and that it just tasted bad, that creates a happier effect for the reader.
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