Famous Last Words Week 6

This week I finished one of my other classes called circuits! Industrial engineers only have to take one part of circuits, so it’s kind of a mini-semester two month class. I took my final on Monday, so it feels so nice to have one less class to worry about! I am hoping this will give me more time to work on this class, and spend some more time fine-tuning my writing skills.

(Image Information: personal photo of a portion of my circuits project;

photo from September 2015.)

I think my best writing from this week was the introduction I wrote/revised for my storybook project. I am really excited about where that project will go. I have a general idea for what I want each of my stories to look like, but I feel like they will really start to come to life once I do some more in-depth brainstorming and writing. I’m glad we have the opportunity to alter famous stories and make them our own. This allows for so much creativity!

I am consistently amazed by my classmate’s writing skills. Reading some of the other storytelling assignments has allowed me to see where my writing has some room for improvement. Specifically, I think that I can improve my word choice and imagery. This is something I’ve noticed my classmates do really well. That attention to detail can take a story from good to great, it just takes a little more time.

I missed a reading diary this week, but hope to be all caught up on the reading by the end of next week. Hopefully some better time management strategies this week will help me to stay on top of all of my courses.

Also, next week, I want to start writing out more detailed notes as I read/watch the movie. I think this will make writing my reading diary blog post so much easier.

Storytelling Week 6- Brothers Face a Riddle

There were once five brothers with the last name of Pandava who were always competing with each other in sports. They loved to play football, soccer, tennis, and run in races against each other. The five of them had been like this for as long as they could remember. Sometimes the oldest brother would win, other times the youngest. Nobody really kept a long term record of who was the “most winningest” brother. It was all just for fun.

One day the brothers were at camp and had just finished a game of basketball when they came across a man sitting by a water jug. There were lots of water stations set up around the camp, so the brothers approached this one because it was the closest. The man by the jug said to them, “The first one to drink the water will not really be the first. It is a competition. Who will be the first to drink the water?”

One of the brothers named Nakula replied, “I don’t have time for your word games old man, I’m thirsty! Move over everyone. I’ll show you exactly who will be first!” Nakula helped himself to the water and immediately spat it out as if he had just drunk a bitter poison. The man looked knowingly at Nakula, and smirked at the remaining brothers.

Sahadeva was the next in line. He looked at his brother with sympathy and said, “C’mon Nakula, everyone knows the old saying ‘first is the worst, second is the best’. Therefore I will be the winner of the water if I am served second.” The man complied with Sahadeva’s request and served him a glass of the water. Similar to Nakula, Sahadeva also spat out the water in disgust.

This happened again for Arjuna and Bhima. Nobody could quench their thirst with the water from the jug. The boys were about to leave and find another place to get a drink, but the man stopped them and asked, “Yudhishthira, why have you not attempted to solve the riddle? Aren’t you thirsty as well?” Yudhishthira quietly responded, “There is an old teaching that says those who are first will be last and those who are last will be first. Therefore, I will wait to see if anyone else wants a drink before I drink.”

The man smiled at Yudhishthira’s wisdom. He responded, “I see no one else in line,” and handed Yudhishthira a bottle of water from behind the jug. The water was clean and refreshing. Yudhishthira only drank a small sip and then passed it around to his brothers. There was plenty to go around, and Yudhishthira was praised for his wisdom.

Water Pour Jug Pouring Liquid

Author: Not Listed, Date: 2014, Source: Pixabay

Author's Note: This story is an adaptation from the story about the Pandava brothers facing a riddle at the lake in our reading this week. I chose to make the characters more modern so the story would be more relatable. I added in the detail about the brothers being competitive so that the reader would feel like they know the characters better. Instead of dying by drinking the water, the brothers were simply given bad water. In both my version and the original story, Yudhishthira proves to be the most wise and patient brother, and is the only one who is able to answer the riddle. However, in this version the "wisdom" is taken from teachings of Christianity when Jesus preaches that those who are first will be last and vice versa.

Bibliography:

"Riddles at the Lake" by Donald A. Mackenzie, from Indian Myth and Legend (1913). Web source: here 

Reading Diary A Week 6- Keeping up with the Pandavas

Draupadi has to be one of the most interesting characters I have ever read about. Unfortunately, I got behind on my reading schedule last week and just now read about her this week. I think she could have been a cool character for my storybook project... but I went ahead and picked my three main characters last week. I might go back and add her in.

Five husbands, good for her! It's interesting to me that the culture has seemed to make an exception for her, and only her. Usually women who are with multiple men are scorned... I mean just look at how Rama treated Sita after she was kidnapped against her will by another man! However, Draupadi was apparently destined to be with all of the Pandava brothers, so she can get away with it.

Unfortunately the brothers lost everything they had. I have a feeling that if it was Draupadi placing the bets then things would not have gotten so out of hand, and they would not have faced exile out in the forest. She is definitely miserable in her exile, and wants revenge. However Yudhishthira is remaining relatively calm through the whole exile. He is portrayed as the "wise" or "cool-headed" one throughout this portion of the reading. This confused met because he obviously wasn't THAT wise when he was gambling away everything he owned. Honestly, I don't know how the whole family isn't incredibly angry with Yudhishthira. In the riddle story I guess he somewhat redeems himself. By using his "wisdom" he is able to avoid the temptation of the water and answer complicated questions about virtue. This revives his people, who had suffered death through their own impatience and misunderstanding.

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Photographer: Flickr user vaticanus, Date: Nov. 2007, Source: Flickr